For L/L writing we have to write a short story between 500-600 word, our teacher give us to choose two ideas to the story: "Solcial classes" or "A drama between a mom and a child" y choose the second because i think it was more interesting and grate idea.
Feelings that do wrong.
It was a beautiful day in a house of Australia, one family decided to go on a picnic. These was a mother (Sara) a father (Charl) a son (Tom) of 16 years old and a little girl of 5 called Sophy. Sara worked in an office and Charl worked in a factory. In the family Tom had a strongest personality. He was very jealous of Sophy. Some hours after when the family was in the park, Tom started analysing the situation. He took the conclusion that they always looked at Sophy. Nobody paid attention to Tom, when they were in the picnic Tom saw that his parents always looked at her giving presents to Sophy. When she wanted to have something they went and brought the toy or whatever she wanted. Everyone knew that Tom was a very jealous boy, but it always happened the same, parents started controlling him giving some toy or some material thing, but Tom saw that they didnt only gave toys or material things to Sophy, they also gave her love, and he didnt recive love, apart of being very jelous in that moment he was very sad because he thought that his parents didnt love him. At one moment, when they were in the park, Sophy wanted an ice-cream that was at the place and Charl went and bougth an ice-cream for Sophy and not for Tom. Tom was feeling very Bad he didnt want to be any more at that house like this. Two days after when they came to the house, Tom was still with a bad face, nobody could take that horrible face, so it was like if he had seen a monster. Tom was so jealous that one night when Sophy was sleeping and his mother and father too, Tom with a knife went to the bedroom and cut Sophy's arm. After that, he really regreted that. When all the family woke up in the morning he was still sleeping. Sara went to Sophy's bedroom and saw that in Sophy's head she had a little thing, Everyone knew that Tom was who did it. Everyone looked at Tom, so when Tom got up and saw the cut on the head of his sister, he didnt say anything, but inside he was terribly sad of the thing that he did to his sister. His parents were so scared because of the thing that Sophy had in he head. So une day very slow when they were eating at night, they started to talk about this thing that happened to Sophy and in one moment Tom couldnt hold this inside so he said that he had done it. He started to tell all the things that he felt inside, he started feeling that he was very Jelous about Sophy and that he was very sad. Also he told that they always paid attention to Sophy and he was always at the side of the family, that he thought that nobody looked at him when he told all this to his parents. They felt very bad and obvius by took care of the situation. They said that it would all change and they would pay attention to him, and he always had to talk to his parents first. They didnt know that was happening because they didnt pay attention to that. And from that day Sara and Charl started loving Sophy and Tom very much and Tom haved Sophy too.
End.
